This is one of the questions and answers to one of myscholarship questions, I want help to review/edit/add to make itsound better please!
1. What is your most meaningful achievement, and howdoes it relate to your field of study and your futuregoals?
The most meaningful achievement I have faced was beating cancerin March 2016 during my senior year of high school. This experiencechanged my view on many aspects of my life. Being in the hospitalfor so many hours while being cared for by such amazing nurses mademe want to be someone that can help others. I have gained a stronglove andempathetic side for everyone, I want to help people andgive them the hope of a second chance. During this life experience,I started to acknowledge how important my health is, not only withincorporating exercise but with eating nutritious food.
From then on, I started to gain a passion for nutrition. Themedical setting is where I wanted to be. My goal is to one day beable to help children live a healthier life and give them the hopeand love they need.