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Dear Adrienne In reference to our telephone conversation of August 27 I would like to resterate how distressed we are with your experience with our new Canon digital camera. The camera as you know is made for dummies and it is difficult to mess up a picture so I am not sure why you're pictures were not on your memory card While negative feedback such as what we received from you is not what we like to here, it does provide us an opportunity to examine the product for defects which retually turn out to be isolated incidents. In addition to examining the product our production team uses it for the research for future products. Here at Canon Cameras we appreciate all feedback end our board of directors see it as a method to improve existing products and sales We are more than happy to examine your camera for defects and would like to have it sefurried to us as soon as possible (ASAP) in cedet to address this in an expeditious manner and should we find defect, we will replace your camera at no extra costs If you have any questions or queries, don't hesitate to touch base with me once again. I really appreciate it allot that you contact us with your compliant Yours try truly John Jones CEO Cinem

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